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Explanation: Crutch or Catalyst?

Should a designer stick an explanation in the design itself?

I’ve done it at least four times: all four times on covers for books of fiction, and I wish I’d done it on at least two more. Once, I wrote a fake quote on the back cover. I intended it as a placeholder for a quote to come, but I didn’t want to drop in nonsense. So I wrote a brief myth about the illustration I’d done, in effect explaining the design to the client. Turns out they liked it so much they kept it, and of course in my heart of hearts, I craved this all along. Another time, I snuck in a poetic introduction on the rights page that set out the themes embodied on the cover. I did this because the client needed me to explain my cover, and so I thought his readers might appreciate an interpretive boost as well. Again, the client liked it and kept it. The other examples are more of the same. Sometimes the explanation is on the cover itself, that is, literally within the design, and sometimes it resides nearby, in a note or introduction.

Is this humbly helpful or artistically arrogant?

I think it’s artistically helpful, but whether it’s humble is debatable.

As a writer who designs, I am more comfortable receiving my complex messages in a words-and-symbols combo rather than just as symbols. It is what I’m used to. It is what I want. And so the more words there are helping me interpret a set of symbols, the happier I am. Incorporating an explanation into the design of a book cover, then, may operate as a means to reach an audience. (Ha! A marketing explanation for a design explanation. I love it. How much more self-serving can market theories be?) Design explanations might be dimly uncontroversial in this narrow case.

Explanations outside the design itself are commonplace. The existence of a monograph as inspiring as Martin Venezky’s It Is Beautiful...Then Gone depends on the premise that designers enjoy explanations of designs. Essays, interviews, confessions about the joys of experiment and process: it’s all there. And it’s all, more or less, explanation. The unresolved tension between design and explanation is one of the most interesting paradoxes embodied by design writing. How many times have you seen a magazine undergo a complete redesign and not explain itself?

Here’s some of my thinking about explanations within the design (I really should come up with an epithet for this. Organic explanations? Word droppings? Forget it). The controversy for me lies more in the gratuitous use of explanations or, perhaps, the uses that more explicitly relate to artistic interpretation—the relationships between symbols. Art, since at least the time of Duchamp, has depended on explanations external to the artwork for its meaning. Without explanations, a viewer can’t really appreciate the art, can’t locate the work in some kind of context, some kind of historical relationship. Without gallery guides, critical essays or art history classes, I would have little means to grasp the significance of the last 60 or so years of art. Without this foundation, I see only pretty colors or ugly dogs, washes of light or scraps of paper, same as I see when walking down the street.

The audience for design is unlikely to put in hours of reading and study in order to get the point of a book cover, website or package, which hard-earned understanding is then supposed to influence a consumer choice. Explanations within a design might add more to the design itself while responding to the right-here-right-now demands of its audience. Explanations are not new, not crazy, not unheard of. I feel I have to say this to preempt the designer’s instinctive objection that design is not art and that any design that needs an explanation has failed. My own sense is that explanations, in some figurative, poetic way, can free the designer to realize some more complicated, sophisticated, ambivalent, and probably more artistic means of expression. It might be that “explanation” is a misleading term suggesting some dry block of 7-point type in the lower right corner. I mean something more sophisticated than that. Perhaps poetry, myth, allegory, a quote, a joke, a subtitle, a panel series in a comic format, maybe something worked in like collage or a reference to another work, something that might even expand the meaning of the work rather than explain it. It should be more like a candle of suggestion rather than a hammer of finality.

I’m also suggesting that meaning can be severed from the object (book, movie, event, product) and nested in the design (cover, website, poster, packaging). With the book covers that incorporated my explanations, I was not trying to depend on the content of the books for meaning. I may have began there, but these were only starting points for inspiration. After that, I was bolstering the designs themselves as semi-stand-alone carriers of meaning. Whether or not I have succeeded does not detract from the worth of the intent; losing a race doesn’t make racing bad. If I wrote up an explanation of a design and the explanation was simplistic and dull, then I could be free of that design, toss it out with its lame explanation, and start again, designing toward a more interesting, vibrant explanation, embodying a more complicated story. This process of explaining serves as self-editing, but its utility can be transformed into a cousin of art by its expression within the design. Read the book, don’t read the book. The design still means something (if only to me, but isn’t that always doomed to be the case?).

This is, perhaps, what is most controversial: incorporating explanations into a design not to reach an audience, not to embody another’s message, but instead to assert an independence of meaning for the design itself. And is this at bottom a spiteful means by which I assert my independence? Am I declaring mutiny on the bounty of the client/designer relationship? Am I even describing design anymore?

Should a designer incorporate an explanation within the design itself? Is this humbly helpful or artistically arrogant?

Explain yourself.

About the Author: David Barringer is the author of American Mutt Barks in the Yard published in Emigre 68. His first novel, Johnny Red, was published by Word Riot Press. Email: curious@davidbarringer.com. Site: http://www.davidbarringer.com.

  1. link to this comment by Jason Aristofanis Tselentis Tue Mar 07, 2006

    More than anything, explanations or captions tell the audience what they should see. How many of us like being told what to look at, or what we're seeing? Isn't discovery more valuable and rewarding than spoon-feeding? When the design fails to serve its purpose, and requires an explanation, then it isn't design. It isn't about communication. I don't know if it deserves any other label than art.

    My little rant above is devoid of context, so let's talk about where explanations would help. There is an arena for explanations, David. Award shows and annuals flaunt work that is deemed the best or great. But how and why? Why don't we learn more about the process, client, audience, or success of the work through some elaborate explanation? Why can't we read an explanation here, perhaps from the judges standpoint, and more importantly, from the client, designer, or user?!

  2. link to this comment by Gahlord Dewald Tue Mar 07, 2006

    I don't think there's a big deal here. You just went all the way and started mashing up with the covers you designed it sounds likes.

    If you felt the work achieved acceptable goals, and the client felt so as well, then so be it.

    You can make images and you can write. You took that tactical advantage and leveraged it into a design that appealed to your first target market: whoever is supposed to approve the job.

    As to whether it worked in the field you'd need data on that.

    But it doesn't sound like such a big deal to me. I wouldn't call them explanations myself but something like annotations or illuminations or something but thats all just semantics.

  3. link to this comment by Lea Ann Hutter Tue Mar 07, 2006

    If the design is inspired by the object, then it follows that an explanation of the design can confirm and expand the viewer's understanding of the object as well as the design. That can be satisfying to the viewer, our clients and ourselves.

    The 2 examples of writing a brief myth about the illustration and a poetic introduction sound humbly helpful to me. When we have the opportunity to enhance design and object meaning with appropriate words, then we show clients that we do more than create the look of content - we contribute to the content itself.

  4. link to this comment by Kala Subramaniam Wed Mar 08, 2006

    An explanation with the design suggests the thought that has gone behind it. This helps the clients to understand why the design is the way it is. But it should go into the print, is not a good idea.
    Viewers should have the liberty to interpret what they see and weather the design conveys the intended meaning, is the challenge.

  5. link to this comment by Josh Hardy Thu Mar 09, 2006

    There's something to be said about the power of using two languages—in this case, design and the written word—simultaneously to communicate a complete message. The point is not to repeat verbally what we say graphically, but to use one to complement the other. We can draw our cues from music: we needn't sing in unison; harmony is a beautiful thing.

  6. link to this comment by Yu Ki Thu May 25, 2006

    I think it makes perfect sense to add a description of what the cover picture means when it comes to books and even magazines. It shows the intention of the designer in what he/she is trying to communicate. It also shows that the designer is being relfective.

    However, I don't think the same will work in advertisements and marketing materials and internet. This is because the objective and use in the medium is entirely different to that of a book.

  7. link to this comment by Diana Howard Thu Sep 06, 2007

    It's disheartening for this designer to hear of yet MORE annotative aspects to the design process. It seems that we already spend too much time translating the visual into words—the lengthy creative briefs, the presentation script—and everyone is getting afraid of the visual unadorned by verbage. Our power as visual artists is in our manipulation of visual elements and we give up some of our power and some of the magic by anchoring purely visual effects in the verbal sediment.

  8. link to this comment by Barry A. Smith Mon Dec 10, 2007

    Respectfully, and per Kala's remarks..."An explanation with the design suggests the thought that has gone behind it."

    I say...An explanation shouldn't be just a suggestion, rather, an explanation IS THE THOUGHT THAT WENT INTO IT.

    Per Diana Howard's comments, and respectfully...

    As designers go, it's not power or magic we yield. Design isn't voodoo. Our team approaches designing a book with intention, in whole or in part to elicit emotion, capture attention, tell a story, get noticed, take you to a place, and in general to play a specific purpose that at the end of the day, whether this resonates fully or not, is in part functional, and in whole commerce.

    Designers shoot themselves in the foot by feeling that in some way sharing what they know is somehow bad or evil. Paramount in my point here is that sharing what we know is in fact what we are paid for and what gives us our tangible value.

    As reference, as a senior member of a publishing design team, we require everyone from designers to our senior design staff to begin strategic and conceptual thinking by developing rationale internally for discussion and focus. Then, rationale is further discussed and finessed, flushed out and then required to accompany the designs themselves. As a creative team in publishing, we are sharing the design approach with multiple decision makers both internally and externally. And since our approaches are well researched, based on years of NYT Bestseller track record and good old fashion intuition, and are collaboratively developed and all based on human factors, we would be remiss in NOT sharing our thinking. Plus we have way more confidence in our written communication than we do having a second or third party try to communicate it up channel, which as you all likely know is often where good design crashes and burns.

    This reminds me of a Thomas Jefferson quote which I've had hanging in my offices for years...

    "He who receives an idea from me, receives instruction himself without lessening mine; as he who lights his taper at mine receives light without darkening me."

    Designers who see themselves as giving in or giving away when they have to offer written rationale are in my opinion missing out on the finessing, improvement, and collective momentum which comes from a healthy give and take that is typified in a innovative and healthy creative team environment.

    Thanks you the opportunity to comment to my fellow AIGA members in this fashion.

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